Still trying to figure out the layout of this page. The original layout wasn’t really working. Decided to flip the scene horizontally so that when viewing the scene your eyes are drawn (left to right) from Kat to the girl with the afro puffs, then to the rest of the figures. Also story didn’t flow correctly with the previous page, so removed one of the panels. The conversation wasn’t needed. This scene is more direct and too the point. Next I will ink all of the figures then add the glass and broken window. Hope to get this completed in the next few days.
page 5 re-work rough
original page draw a year ago.
original page draw a year ago.
